<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><br class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 2020-01-15, at 11:57, Alex Stuart <<a href="mailto:Alex.Stuart@jisc.ac.uk" class="">Alex.Stuart@jisc.ac.uk</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="">I've a grammar nit. <br class=""><br class="">In lines 319 and 320, the document says "Both the [SAML2Bind] sections 3.6 and 3.6.4 uses of SHA-1, and its resulting use in this protocol, would be vulnerable to an attack…" <br class=""><br class="">I think that "both" could be taken to mean that there are distinct use described in both section 3.6 and 3.6.4; I certainly interpreted it that way on a first reading. Since SHA-1 is only explicitly mentioned in [SAML2Bind] in section 3.6.4, what would make more sense to me is "The use of SHA-1 in section 3.6.4 of [SAML2Bind], and its resulting use in this protocol, would be vulnerable to an attack…" <br class=""></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=""></div><div>I agree that your alternative reads better, so I will incorporate it.</div><div><br class=""></div><div>Thanks,</div><div><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; border-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; border-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div class=""> -- Ian<br class=""></div><div class=""><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: medium;"><br class=""></span></div></span></div></span><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><br class="Apple-interchange-newline">
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